When the rain was running the ramp it sound like thunder and the rain was coming down on our deck and on the deck very hard on the turf and the grass and by room4 and room5 and room6 the turf by our turf it was raining very hard on the turf by room1 room2 and room3's turf outside it was fun but tom want to play rugby on the grass and it stopped raining.
It was raining down hard from the sky and it sounded like thunder come from the sky the turf was running coved in rain it souned fun looking at it then mrs long told us to come back inside.$$$
The rain was coming down really hard from the sky it was fun when it came down from the sky and the puddle was big one by the old fire stainan mum and logan went through the puddle the water went everywhere and on the side it was big as.
Rain was coming down hard from the sky then we came out to see the rain comedown from the sky it was amzing when it come then we hadto come back in side of room3 toady. by Carlos Schouten
The rain was like snow when it was coming down from the sky really hard then we came outside to see the rain come down from the sky then telled us to come back into room3 then tells us to pack up the class room 3 to make the class room tidy.
When some hard rain from the sky it sound like thunder and lighting flashing and it was like a storm rolling into earth and it was really loud thunder storm coming in to earth.
When the rain was really hard and nosiey when the rain came from the sky there was running on the turf it was really loud when we came outside the class room it was really fast on the turf.
i had to play rugby in that wether we verst marests it was haling and when it hit my legs it really hert !!
ReplyDeleteit was like a big explshen know one even heard me
ReplyDeleteThe rean wose going down rely fast
ReplyDeleteit was loud and look like sown it was wet.
ReplyDeleterock hit the roof? i think
ReplyDeleteit sounds like a rocket blasting off.
ReplyDeletei coudnot beveyit.
ReplyDeleteit sounds like a tornado
ReplyDeleteeverything was covered with rain
ReplyDeleteWhen the rain was running the ramp it sound like thunder and the rain was coming down on our deck and on the deck very hard on the turf and the grass and by room4 and room5 and room6 the turf by our turf it was raining very hard on the turf by room1 room2 and room3's turf outside it was fun but tom want to play rugby on the grass and it stopped raining.
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ReplyDeleteWhen the rain run's down it look like snow it is really nosey and really hevey. it makes a lot of big puldils.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Liam, I liked how you said it looked like snow!
Deleteyea great writing liam but man it was raining cat and dogie it looked like our class was about to float away
ReplyDeleteIt was raining down hard from the sky and it sounded like thunder come from the sky the turf was running coved in rain it souned fun looking at it then mrs long told us to come back inside.$$$
ReplyDeleteThe rain was coming down really hard from the sky it was fun when it came down from the sky and the puddle was big one by the old fire stainan mum and logan went through the puddle the water went everywhere and on the side it was big as.
ReplyDeleteRain was coming down hard from the sky then we came out to see the rain comedown from the sky it was amzing when it come then we hadto come back in side of room3 toady. by Carlos Schouten
ReplyDeleteThe rain was coming down from the sky it was coming down really really hard then we come outside to see it rain really hard.
ReplyDeleteThe rain was like snow when it was coming down from the sky really hard then we came outside to see the rain come down from the sky then telled us to come back into room3 then tells us to pack up the class room 3 to make the class room tidy.
ReplyDeleteWhen some hard rain from the sky it sound like thunder and lighting flashing and it was like a storm rolling into earth and it was really loud thunder storm coming in to earth.
ReplyDeleteit really wet
ReplyDeleteit was like a mini flood
ReplyDeletethe wether gets wors
ReplyDeleteMe no like the rain
ReplyDeleteWhen the rain was really hard and nosiey when the rain came from the sky there was running on the turf it was really loud when we came outside the class room it was really fast on the turf.
ReplyDeleteit was really loud that we had to shout.
ReplyDeleteIt was like a mug of water splashed out side.
ReplyDeleteAnd it was cold
Deletehay Connor I think the same
DeleteSameee I felt like mug watr was come down out of mug
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